Revised the dialogue written in class yesterday. Checked to be sure it showed something important, and that it is punctuated correctly. Also, checked for apostrophes being used to form contractions and to show possession. And finally, added a "thoughtshot," and checking to make sure this reflection is present throughout the piece and at the very end. HW: Start typing memoir, making sure to incorporate changes you made to improve the piece. On Friday, you will be submitting a final draft with earlier drafts attached to it. I will be looking closely at whether you are using the apostrophe rules you just learned (points will be deducted for each mistake). Bonus Points: Submit a photo of yourself at the time this incident occurred = 5 point. Submitting both a hard copy and a digital copy via email = 5 points. Understand that if you submit it digitally you agree to let me use it to teach future students. I won't use your name if I use it.