Quiz on compound sentences. Add FCA's (focus correction areas) to rough drafts of profiles. FCA#1: Sentence combining or sentence variety. Do this 4 times in the piece. FCA#2: Replace vague words with more specific ones (10X) FCA#3: In the margins, write 1 or 2 words indicating what each paragraph is about. Then, check to be sure each one contributes to your focus. If it doesn't, either get rid of it, or make it connect. Your FCA work should be highlighted in some way in your draft (ex: underlining) so I can find it easily. Please use color coding: a different color for each FCA .HW: Work on profiles. Bring a rough draft to class on Monday for peer and teacher editing. Final drafts are due next Wednesday.